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Canine 2yo Male, Tall & Thin Immigrant 17 posts 0 Honor 313 ☪ peasnqueues
#1
Character's First Name: Wallace
Species: Canine
Origin: Immigrant
Grindhold: Euthalia
Vulnerability: Fragility. He's got brittle, hollow bones and does not heal as fast as others.
Passive Enchantment: None
Extra: N/A

Played by: peasnqueues
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human 25yo Nonbinary, Short & Average Native 2 posts 0 Honor 15 ☪ argent
#2
Under Review

Hi! Thank you for applying to Ourania! Before I can get you accepted, I just need some additional clarification.

Vulnerabilities are "a weakness that imparts upon them a means of potential harm or fatality." I'm not really seeing how a fear of heights and vertigo would mesh with being a winged wolf's vulnerability. Could you please expand on it (you could make the vertigo his vulnerability instead, for example, or add on other ways that it physically affects him)? I'd also like to see more for his appearance; while we don't have a word requirement, two sentences is a wee sparse
Thank you!! Let me know when you're ready for staff to come and review c:
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Canine 2yo Male, Tall & Thin Immigrant 17 posts 0 Honor 313 ☪ peasnqueues
#3
I switched things up a bit and I'm ready for another review! 

I hope this works, but I am happy to keep tweaking until Wally is sparkling. Figuratively speaking.
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human 25yo Nonbinary, Short & Average Native 2 posts 0 Honor 15 ☪ argent
#4
Character Accepted!

Your account will be activated momentarily and then you are free to post across the forums. Welcome to Ourania!
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