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Equine 1338yo Male, Tall & Average Native 0 posts Honor 25 ☪ Darkrise
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Character's First Name: Helios
Species: Equine
Origin: Native
Grindhold: Udane?
Vulnerability: When Helios is chained/tie or trapped in any way- could be trapped in a locked building, trapped by fallen debris, trapped by others (ie have literally no way to get out) he becomes physically unable to do anything. This is because his manner of death left an invisible scar on him. He was killed by fallen rubble and because he was raised from the dead by dark magic it still impacts.
Passive Enchantment: essentially his nostrils and halo glow lol
Extra: erm idk if its relevant but he's the Helios mentioned in Nyx's profile and was created by the gods and stuff. Also please ignore the ring on his hoof and in his nose, he doesn't have them yet without alchemy c:

Played by: Darkrise

Thank you very much!
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human 31yo Female, Tall & Average Native 8 posts 10 Honor 165 ☪ Maggie
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Under Review

Hi @Helios! After reading over your vulnerability, we don't think it's quite in line with what we're looking for. Vulnerabilities should be something that can affect your character greatly at any point in time, preferably on a regular basis. This is something that can easily be avoided long-term. Perhaps there's a way you can beef it/alter it? Feel free to DM me and we can go over ideas!

Also, very sorry for the delay on this.
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